Another sudden, shrill scream erupted from Citrine. Na’thresh sprung to his hands and knees to turn towards the noise. Neither of the sisters were where he thought they would be, having been driven back by the blast. He quickly spotted them laying on the ground a few dozen feet away. The sisters were separated, Cassandra crawling to her feet a good distance away from Citrine. The blast had apparently thrown her from her sister’s side, planting her in the firmer dirt near the outskirts of the courtyard. The younger girl was holding her head with both hands and tucking her limbs in close, continuing to wail. A second noise rose up to clash with hers.
Shambling monstrosities, once partially concealed by the haze of the floodlights, were now also revealed in their entirety. Varied few encircled the court, but they were not the sources of the droning clamor. Moaning, hollow groans echoed from further away. Na’thresh looked around past Citrine to take in the ruins of Roma Way once again. He could see ruined structures on tiered terraces, set in to the mountain. The roads and lawns in front of cabin-styled buildings were covered in twitching, shuffling shapes. All of them moved in staggered pace toward the courtyard in front of the ranger’s station. Before he knew what was happening, Na’thresh was frantically scrambling to his feet. Saikah leapt up to aid Citrine while Aru’ine rushed over to help set Na’thresh straight. The two men gathered themselves and ran after Saikah.
Cassandra reached Citrine first, scooping her up and hurriedly throwing her on Na’thresh as he approached. He stumbled back awkwardly gripping at the small ward thrust upon him, trying not to let her slide through his grasp. He managed to hold her fast, despite her dress being drenched in slippery muck.
“Run, dammit! We have to get out of here!” Cassandra glared through him.
“Hold on, what just happened?” Na’thresh pleaded. “What are these things?”
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Well, today is the day! Chaos has officially been published, and you can purchase your copy in either Kindle format or in paperback. How exciting! Kindle format will be available in 12 hours, but the paperback is available NOW.
Chaos has capped out at 168,406 words and 507 pages.
This post contains the transcript of interview questions posed to Totak H. Clymes.
- What inspired you to write your first book?
- The first book I ever wrote was a little short story in elementary. My second foray happened in high school, and both were inspired by a need to garner a good grade in Language Arts. Amissio Libra is my first work inspired by actual inspiration, and this time it’s for anything but scholarly achievement. Were it not for my bedmate, I would have never put the story to print.
- Do you have a specific writing style?
- Repetitive typing.
- When did you consider yourself a writer?
- Maybe next year.
- If you had to choose, which writer would you consider a mentor?
- I’ve never had the pleasure of meeting any of the writers, scripters or artists who have inspired me in the past. Calling one out as a mentor might be a bit delusional. Having said that, the most read of the authors on my bookshelf includes Michael Crichton and Richard A. Knaack.
- What are your current projects?
- Amissio Libra: Declina, graduating from yet another college…again, and nagging my live-in Agent to promote Chaos.
- Do you see writing as a career?
- Only if it pays the bills and keeps my family fed. Otherwise, it’s a semi-fulfilling, time-consuming hobby. Like my education.
- Is there anything you find particularly challenging in your writing?
- Consistency. Also consistency.
- What did you learn from writing your book?
- It would be shorter to list the number of things I knew going into the project. So aside from opening my laptop and typing until I can’t feel feelings, I had to learn nearly every relevant aspect of proper creative writing.
- Do you have any advice for other writers?
- See #3.
- Do you have anything specific that you want to say to your future fans?
- My unproductive, expensive habits thank you for your support. Oh, and I hope you enjoy the ride. I’ll try to at least make it entertaining and less frustrating to read than it was to write.
- What genre are your books?
- They will all fall under Contemporary Fantasy. Eventually, I’ll need to fall back on some High Fantasy concepts as the world becomes less … there. But rather than inventing my own world, I’m destroying the one already here. I have also been informed that some of my rough material bordered on Absurdist, but I hope to rectify those areas before any official release.
- How much research do you do?
- Too much and not enough. I try to be as accurate as possible when describing a place derived from reality, but there are concepts explored that might benefit from further investigation. For instance, Isa’s native language and proper phrasing, protocol for militarizing an entire country and proper order of operations in dealing with dynamic and unpredictable domestic threats. I also face particular difficulties in classifying my own rules for the interactions of Xi and Xan on the natural world. Somewhere along the line, I have to choose between being too accurate or too vague for the sake of consistency.
- What do you find most distracting while you write?
- Do you get writer’s block? What do you do to get through it?
- Every second of every day. I’d like to say I’m more stubborn than my WB, but that’d be a poor excuse for a lie. Time heals the bulk of the WB, reading or watching favored movies does the rest. The only surefire cure for WB is inspiration and the desire to “get to the good part”.
- How much of the book is realistic?
- I’ll have to re-check Google Earth. Jest aside, the book centers on characters entirely fictional in an opening setting of equally fictional origins. Roma and Saikah’s home are based on places I have seen firsthand, but both were in other locales. Unless I’m mistaken, I’m almost entirely sure that Seattle is the only other major setting of the novel. That part is real.
- Is there a message in your book that you want readers to grasp?
- There are several underlying themes but no real moral message. On the other hand, one of those themes is the blurring of the lines between the predefined notions of good and evil. Starting out, I have to lay down the line in order to scrub it away later. I hope readers enjoy the journey in the interim.